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This is quite a change from your usual Space theme, though still based in sci-fi, and I really like it! Your use of light on objects is pretty impeccable as usual - I especially like it through the blinds and the glass on the table. Admittedly I'm not sure what the HUD is supposed to be on / where viewed from. So if it's someone's vision or on a glass panel in front of your Dragoness. Your signature on it is a fun little detail which I like too.
I read that you're just getting into drawing people and it is difficult, but you've done really well here. Some things I would point out to - that stand out to me - the right side of your figure seems more smoothed / blurred than I perceive it should be, I think there would still be definition there, even if it is shrouded in shadow. The prosthetic appears a little too smooth on the upper arm. Perhaps it's just that I've looked at this for a while but the prosthetic grabs my attention I think by not quite fitting in with her mini jacket. (I know it's metal and clearly not part of her original body, but hopefully you see what I mean). The parts of her that catch the light do so very well, especially her stomach, though I think her cigarette hand is a little too curved as it follows her hip.
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